Nigerian forum: Literature - ONE WRONG TURN EPISODE 18
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8 May 2015 07:06

I finished my meal hurriedly, Ehis still wasnt back
from the chemist. I laid back on the bed, and started
typing on my phone again.
I pinged Hannah and Ruth again, to find out where
they were. This time, it took a while to get any
response. I guess they were really busy.
A reply came in after five minutes. It was from Ruth
"we are at meridian hotel"
I have heard a lot about that hotel, it was one of the
busiest and most expensive in the city. It had
everything, from royal suites to jacuzzis.
It was like a reclining house for the creme de
lacreme of the society. If Ruth and Hannah were
there, then a 'big fish' must be involved.
"Who are you with"? I inquired
"One senator like that" ....from Ruth
It was at this point in my life i realised the sort of
people Ruth and Hannah were.
My friends were cheap hoes, they sell their body for
money. I detested their kind of life, but i have
covertly become like them.
I tried to convince myself that i wasn't like them,
after all i wasn't selling my body for money, i was in
love.
The sound of the door handle turning interrupted
my thoughts. Ehis had returned from the chemist,
he carried a weird smile on his face.
He locked the door, and sat right next to me on the
bed. We began a conversation about our childhood
and parents.
I told him how my parents had prevented me from
having any kind of fun.
He seemed very understanding, and as usual was
full of encouraging words.
Ehis turned towards me, and began his usual
charade of words with his soft appealing baritone
voice.
"Ella, you know how much i love and cherish you.
I'm willing to do anything for you. I ll show you more
love than your parents ever will".
His words had the usual effect on me. I could feel
that flutter in my tommy again. I made no attempt to
resist as his lips touched mine.
*****
*****
*****
I felt a lot of pain, it was as if some flesh was being
ripped out of me. But somewhere between the pain,
i felt something i hadn't felt before.
I can't tell how long it lasted, but i was glad it was
over. The pain was rather excruciating.
I sat up on the bed, and looked in between my
thighs. I noticed trickles of blood flowing. It was then
it dawned on me, i had lost my virginity.
A new feeling if sadness and regret overwhelmed
me. I suddenly wished i hadn't, I had lost something
forever.
I looked towards Ehis with, he was busy putting his
clothes back on looking rather indifferent.
His eyes caught my gaze, he must have noticed the
apprehension on my face, as he moved closer and
hugged my Unclad flesh.
I didn't feel anything anymore, all that remained was
slight regret. The whole episode did not seem right
to me.
His hug barely made any difference. Slowly i dressed
myself up, and attempted to stand up. It was time to
go home.
As I stood u, i felt a Sharp pain down below, it made
my walking steps awkward. I just prayed it stops
before i get home.
Managed to walk up to the door, which he held open
for me. As we walked towards the car, i tried to walk
as normally as possible despite the pain.
I did not want to give the silly boys any impression.
It obviously didn't work though, as their jeering and
senseless talk continued.
As we drove away, i kept silent. A lot of thoughts
filtered through my mind. What would change after
today? Will my mum ever find out? Have i made a
mistake? Only time will tell.
The silence from Ehis was equally deafening. He
seemed indifferent about my feelings.
Few blocks away from my house, i told him to pull
over. I did not want any one around my
neighbourhood to seem me inside the car with a
boy.
"is anything the matter"? Ehis asked in a calm voice.
"i just don't want to be seen coming out of your car"
I answered.
"no not that, you seem tensed"
" I'm scared, i feel a little different. What if some one
finds out", i said almost shedding tears.
He grabbed hold of my hands and pulled me closer
to himself.
"Ella, i mean every word i said to you. I ll always love
you"
His words infused me with some courage. I felt
much relieve. Perhaps they were the words i needed
to hear.
"learn to stand up to your parents, you are not a kid
anymore" he said in a cold voice, lettin go of me.
I reached out and kissed his lips, before stepping
out of the car, to make my way home.
The walk home was very uncomfortable, i felt a lot
of pain in between my tights.
My whole body ached, but i had to put on a bold
face. My heart pounded as i approached the gate to
my house.
**
The angry figure on my mum greeted my as soon as
I opened the gate. She stood there as if she had
been waiting for me.
" were are you coming from young lady?" She asked,
sounding really angry
"from lectures"
"shut up, your lectures ended since 3:30" she cut in
Those words sent shivers down my spine. I have
been caught, and its only the first day.
But how on earth did my mum find out that i closed
earlier? I wondered with my mouth wide open
"Go to your room and wait for me" she ordered
As i walked into the house, my mum took a
thorough objective look at me, frisking me with her
eyes. She must have noticed that i wasn't walking
properly.
I got to my room, took off my uniform, and emptied
my school bag. I needed to take a bath.
My room door flew open suddenly. There was my
mum again, with a pair of sterile gloves in her hand.

8 May 2015 11:24

hmmm,what a good mother

8 May 2015 11:48

Wahala,, u see urself?

8 May 2015 11:51

Quote by Lancemike007
Wahala,, u see urself?

U know love is blind

8 May 2015 12:42

Hu tell u say love blind eh? Girl u don enter wahala, i just hope u no get belle or contact anything frm ur lover boy...Gudluck

8 May 2015 14:44

What a concerned mother! But for Ehis, i feel a lot of shame, regrets, and disappointments. Things can no longer be the same again with Ehis- congratulations!

8 May 2015 15:22

EYA!!!! PITY LITTLE U

8 May 2015 15:34

what a great Mother!

8 May 2015 15:57
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8 May 2015 16:57

So pathetic

8 May 2015 18:23

Eyaaa,poor girl.u hv enter big problem.

8 May 2015 18:48

Wat a gud mother

8 May 2015 19:02

Quote by Adeola2468
Quote by Lancemike007
Wahala,, u see urself?

U know love is blind

This isnt love but lust

8 May 2015 19:09

I've missed a gr8 deal of this story. I thought by now Ella n her friends must have learned their lessons frm Hannah's ordeal. Seems these girls are really stubborn BUT one thing they should knw is this- "There is a way that seemeth right unto a man BUT the end thereof are the ways of death". At ss3 you say you are in love; who told you?? You are simply in LUST. Ella has bitten more than she can chew. I dnt pity her coz she made the wrong turn. Penalty time.

8 May 2015 19:10

What a GOOD MOTHER!

8 May 2015 20:38

Hmm, wat a sweet mother

8 May 2015 21:57

you lose what money cannot buy the pride of every good woman the communication between you and heaven a gold that lose you will never find again what are we living in now know more respect for viginity any more joy of marriage have being distory my people are prish for lack of knowlagd may God for use for his house that we distory we love and please devil than please God

8 May 2015 22:09

god hv mercy on her

8 May 2015 22:55

Big whahala

9 May 2015 00:05

Quote by "abike09"
I finished my meal hurriedly, Ehis still wasnt back
from the chemist. I laid back on the bed, and started
typing on my phone again.
I pinged Hannah and Ruth again, to find out where
they were. This time, it took a while to get any
response. I guess they were really busy.
A reply came in after five minutes. It was from Ruth
"we are at meridian hotel"
I have heard a lot about that hotel, it was one of the
busiest and most expensive in the city. It had
everything, from royal suites to jacuzzis.
It was like a reclining house for the creme de
lacreme of the society. If Ruth and Hannah were
there, then a 'big fish' must be involved.
"Who are you with"? I inquired
"One senator like that" ....from Ruth
It was at this point in my life i realised the sort of
people Ruth and Hannah were.
My friends were cheap hoes, they sell their body for
money. I detested their kind of life, but i have
covertly become like them.
I tried to convince myself that i wasn't like them,
after all i wasn't selling my body for money, i was in
love.
The sound of the door handle turning interrupted
my thoughts. Ehis had returned from the chemist,
he carried a weird smile on his face.
He locked the door, and sat right next to me on the
bed. We began a conversation about our childhood
and parents.
I told him how my parents had prevented me from
having any kind of fun.
He seemed very understanding, and as usual was
full of encouraging words.
Ehis turned towards me, and began his usual
charade of words with his soft appealing baritone
voice.
"Ella, you know how much i love and cherish you.
I'm willing to do anything for you. I ll show you more
love than your parents ever will".
His words had the usual effect on me. I could feel
that flutter in my tommy again. I made no attempt to
resist as his lips touched mine.
*****
*****
*****
I felt a lot of pain, it was as if some flesh was being
ripped out of me. But somewhere between the pain,
i felt something i hadn't felt before.
I can't tell how long it lasted, but i was glad it was
over. The pain was rather excruciating.
I sat up on the bed, and looked in between my
thighs. I noticed trickles of blood flowing. It was then
it dawned on me, i had lost my virginity.
A new feeling if sadness and regret overwhelmed
me. I suddenly wished i hadn't, I had lost something
forever.
I looked towards Ehis with, he was busy putting his
clothes back on looking rather indifferent.
His eyes caught my gaze, he must have noticed the
apprehension on my face, as he moved closer and
hugged my Unclad flesh.
I didn't feel anything anymore, all that remained was
slight regret. The whole episode did not seem right
to me.
His hug barely made any difference. Slowly i dressed
myself up, and attempted to stand up. It was time to
go home.
As I stood u, i felt a Sharp pain down below, it made
my walking steps awkward. I just prayed it stops
before i get home.
Managed to walk up to the door, which he held open
for me. As we walked towards the car, i tried to walk
as normally as possible despite the pain.
I did not want to give the silly boys any impression.
It obviously didn't work though, as their jeering and
senseless talk continued.
As we drove away, i kept silent. A lot of thoughts
filtered through my mind. What would change after
today? Will my mum ever find out? Have i made a
mistake? Only time will tell.
The silence from Ehis was equally deafening. He
seemed indifferent about my feelings.
Few blocks away from my house, i told him to pull
over. I did not want any one around my
neighbourhood to seem me inside the car with a
boy.
"is anything the matter"? Ehis asked in a calm voice.
"i just don't want to be seen coming out of your car"
I answered.
"no not that, you seem tensed"
" I'm scared, i feel a little different. What if some one
finds out", i said almost shedding tears.
He grabbed hold of my hands and pulled me closer
to himself.
"Ella, i mean every word i said to you. I ll always love
you"
His words infused me with some courage. I felt
much relieve. Perhaps they were the words i needed
to hear.
"learn to stand up to your parents, you are not a kid
anymore" he said in a cold voice, lettin go of me.
I reached out and kissed his lips, before stepping
out of the car, to make my way home.
The walk home was very uncomfortable, i felt a lot
of pain in between my tights.
My whole body ached, but i had to put on a bold
face. My heart pounded as i approached the gate to
my house.
**
The angry figure on my mum greeted my as soon as
I opened the gate. She stood there as if she had
been waiting for me.
" were are you coming from young lady?" She asked,
sounding really angry
"from lectures"
"shut up, your lectures ended since 3:30" she cut in
Those words sent shivers down my spine. I have
been caught, and its only the first day.
But how on earth did my mum find out that i closed
earlier? I wondered with my mouth wide open
"Go to your room and wait for me" she ordered
As i walked into the house, my mum took a
thorough objective look at me, frisking me with her
eyes. She must have noticed that i wasn't walking
properly.
I got to my room, took off my uniform, and emptied
my school bag. I needed to take a bath.
My room door flew open suddenly. There was my
mum again, with a pair of sterile gloves in her hand.