Nigerian forum: Literature - ONE WRONG TURN EPISODE 14
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28 Apr 2015 00:51

We arrived at my school not quite long after. I was
silent for most part of the journey, a lot of thoughts
ran through my mind.
I would steal occasional glances at Ehis, to see the
expression on his face. He oftened looked
indifferent
The school was very much rowdy, as students were
still outside playing. It was five minutes before the
end of the break.
I came out of the car, and walked cautiously to the
gate, looking around to see if anyone had eyes on
me.
I knocked lightly on the gate, and the harsh voice of
the gate man answered me.
"who is it?"
"sir It's me I'm back"
He stared through the peep hole, and identified me,
as he unlocked the gates and let me in.
As soon as i entered, i spotted Ruth walking down
from the other side of the school. She looked very
much excited to see me.
I hurried into the gate house, and began to change
into my school uniform. I was excited to be back, I
hate stories of my own to share with Ruth.
Ruth rushed into the gate house, and hugged me
tightly.
" at last you ve become a big girl, its about time you
grew up" Ruth said, giving me a familiar look. It was
a look of scrutiny.
"abi?" I replied, twirling around and flaunting my
curves.
"so what did he give you? I know Ehis is loaded"
Ruth queried, sounding very serious
"tada!" Waving my hands for her to see the
wristwatch.
"just that?" She asked, a little disappointed.
I put my hand in the polythene bag i brought with
me, and brought out the mobile phone.
Ruth grabbed it from me excitedly, and did the usual
"girl shout". The phone was a techno M9.
I was so proud of myself, this was almost an
achievment for me. But i was sure my parents would
never let me keep the phone. So i had a plan.
"so did you follow him home?" Ruth asked,
anticipating a quick reply.
"i did"
"and?"
"Nothing" i replied, not knowing exactly what she
wanted to hear.
" so you mean you didn't get down with him?" She
said, pointing towards my v.
"not really,i was scared, you know I'm a virgin" i
replied, in a low tone.
"so you want to carry your virginity to the grave? If a
guy gives you this much, the only you can repay him
is by opening up for him. Stop being selfish, else you
ll lose a guy that loves you so much"
Ruth's words affected me far more than she
realised. Ehis has shown me so much love, he has
spent a lot. I should have given him something in
return, i wondered silently to my self.
The thought of losing Ehis was unbearable. He was
the only one who had shown me so much love.
He gives my life a meaning, more so he provided an
escape from my parents. He deserved something, I
concluded.
"when next we go out, i ll just do it with him" i said
rather boldly
"thats much better, its not a big deal, we all do it.
Just grow up Ella.
I nodded in agreement sheepishly, and started
arranging my person stuff.
The break was already over, and the school
compound was getting quieter as students made
their way into their classrooms.
A thought suddenly hit me, as Ruth asked
"were is Hannah"?
"she went with Ehis's cousin, she will soon be back
I'm sure"
Deep within me, i was really scared. Odion did not
look or sound like a decent person. He looked more
like a thug.
I also knew Hannah would follow him home, to
sleep with him. But shouldnt she have come
already?
We have waited for more than 20 minutes after the
break. And our worry had become pronounce.
I kept pacing up and down the gate house, worried
that something might have happened to Hannah.
Her number wasn't connecting either. Even the gate
man joined my panic.
After 20 more minutes of waiting. We heard a weak
knock on the gate. I prayed silently for it to be
Hannah. I couldn't bear the panic any longer.
The gate man opened up quickly. The sight before us
heightened our anxiety and panic.
Hannah was seated on the ground, looking weak and
spent. Her face looked nothing like the person who
left the school with me today.
Her make up was ruined, something must have
dried up on her face. Her cloths were wet and dirty.
She wore the look of someone who had been
through a lot.
We rushed foward to help her up to her feet, and
carried her into the gate house.
"What happened to you?" Ruth asked with a shaky
voice. I was too dumbfounded to speak.
Hannah began her story from were we got
seperated at the plaza
***Tbc***

28 Apr 2015 09:47

post d rest

28 Apr 2015 09:50

WOT COULD AV APPEN TO HANNA, DIS IS TERRIBLE.

28 Apr 2015 10:05

odion raped hannah ah ella cup don full

28 Apr 2015 10:29

this is quite short oo.. y not make it à little longer suspense too much

28 Apr 2015 11:33

I think that serves Hannah right; i believe dey'll all learn their lessons frm her ordeal. One big problem with our young girls these days is that- They dont know that when the devil gives you something with one hand, he collects more from you with the other hand. Now dey'll knw dat all dey've been enjoying is frm the pit of hell. True blessings come frm God. PROVERBS 10V22. "The blessing of the LORD, it
maketh rich, and he addeth
no sorrow with it"

Edited by MaranathaC / 28 Apr 2015 14:10
28 Apr 2015 12:50

Another super story

28 Apr 2015 13:08

Hmmmm.........odion don chop d pormon yankayanka but dis gul way dey gv us dis story so i dey suspect her na badest gul

28 Apr 2015 15:40

Pls let this continue it's a touching story

28 Apr 2015 16:27

Quote by abike09
We arrived at my school not quite long after. I was
silent for most part of the journey, a lot of thoughts
ran through my mind.
I would steal occasional glances at Ehis, to see the
expression on his face. He oftened looked
indifferent
The school was very much rowdy, as students were
still outside playing. It was five minutes before the
end of the break.
I came out of the car, and walked cautiously to the
gate, looking around to see if anyone had eyes on
me.
I knocked lightly on the gate, and the harsh voice of
the gate man answered me.
"who is it?"
"sir It's me I'm back"
He stared through the peep hole, and identified me,
as he unlocked the gates and let me in.
As soon as i entered, i spotted Ruth walking down
from the other side of the school. She looked very
much excited to see me.
I hurried into the gate house, and began to change
into my school uniform. I was excited to be back, I
hate stories of my own to share with Ruth.
Ruth rushed into the gate house, and hugged me
tightly.
" at last you ve become a big girl, its about time you
grew up" Ruth said, giving me a familiar look. It was
a look of scrutiny.
"abi?" I replied, twirling around and flaunting my
curves.
"so what did he give you? I know Ehis is loaded"
Ruth queried, sounding very serious
"tada!" Waving my hands for her to see the
wristwatch.
"just that?" She asked, a little disappointed.
I put my hand in the polythene bag i brought with
me, and brought out the mobile phone.
Ruth grabbed it from me excitedly, and did the usual
"girl shout". The phone was a techno M9.
I was so proud of myself, this was almost an
achievment for me. But i was sure my parents would
never let me keep the phone. So i had a plan.
"so did you follow him home?" Ruth asked,
anticipating a quick reply.
"i did"
"and?"
"Nothing" i replied, not knowing exactly what she
wanted to hear.
" so you mean you didn't get down with him?" She
said, pointing towards my v.
"not really,i was scared, you know I'm a virgin" i
replied, in a low tone.
"so you want to carry your virginity to the grave? If a
guy gives you this much, the only you can repay him
is by opening up for him. Stop being selfish, else you
ll lose a guy that loves you so much"
Ruth's words affected me far more than she
realised. Ehis has shown me so much love, he has
spent a lot. I should have given him something in
return, i wondered silently to my self.
The thought of losing Ehis was unbearable. He was
the only one who had shown me so much love.
He gives my life a meaning, more so he provided an
escape from my parents. He deserved something, I
concluded.
"when next we go out, i ll just do it with him" i said
rather boldly
"thats much better, its not a big deal, we all do it.
Just grow up Ella.
I nodded in agreement sheepishly, and started
arranging my person stuff.
The break was already over, and the school
compound was getting quieter as students made
their way into their classrooms.
A thought suddenly hit me, as Ruth asked
"were is Hannah"?
"she went with Ehis's cousin, she will soon be back
I'm sure"
Deep within me, i was really scared. Odion did not
look or sound like a decent person. He looked more
like a thug.
I also knew Hannah would follow him home, to
sleep with him. But shouldnt she have come
already?
We have waited for more than 20 minutes after the
break. And our worry had become pronounce.
I kept pacing up and down the gate house, worried
that something might have happened to Hannah.
Her number wasn't connecting either. Even the gate
man joined my panic.
After 20 more minutes of waiting. We heard a weak
knock on the gate. I prayed silently for it to be
Hannah. I couldn't bear the panic any longer.
The gate man opened up quickly. The sight before us
heightened our anxiety and panic.
Hannah was seated on the ground, looking weak and
spent. Her face looked nothing like the person who
left the school with me today.
Her make up was ruined, something must have
dried up on her face. Her cloths were wet and dirty.
She wore the look of someone who had been
through a lot.
We rushed foward to help her up to her feet, and
carried her into the gate house.
"What happened to you?" Ruth asked with a shaky
voice. I was too dumbfounded to speak.
Hannah began her story from were we got
seperated at the plaza
***Tbc***

28 Apr 2015 16:28

Wow,eyaaa,what could have nappened to hanna?so bad.

28 Apr 2015 16:31

THIS IS MESSAGE. HANNAH HAS FOUGHT A FIGHT NO ONE COME TO HER RESCUE. SHE .......

28 Apr 2015 16:31

na lie

28 Apr 2015 22:00

pls pls dis 1 hell of a story, stop dis post all d rest story ejo o

28 Apr 2015 23:24

dat juz example 4 her

29 Apr 2015 09:25

So nice to hear that but please we need the rest

29 Apr 2015 11:10

Nice one, keep it up girl!

29 Apr 2015 13:02

U better keep to ur promies when next u go out with him

29 Apr 2015 13:21

Hmmmmmm!

29 Apr 2015 14:47

the road you went many have died there and many wnt there sucessfull so be careful